Came up with some concept art for posters and what have you. I think they are pretty clever and are sure to stand out. I feel that they still need some touch ups like everything else because everything can be better but there good. I think I am going to make the whole poster yellow on the Pet Waste one with the guy slipping on dog shit. But overall I feel that they are simple and yet carry a very strong message which is the very essence of this film.
I am still having trouble with the dialogue and timing of the animation. I feel that the first draft is too long and I have been reworking a lot of the paragraphs to allow it to flow more. Recording myself say it our loud has been helping me a lot as well. We I can hear what I say I can better understand what works and what doesn't. But for now everything is coming together. It is the home stretch and now I just need to dot the is and cross the ts for graduation.
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